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I come from a family of three people:my father,my mother and I.The first one I want to talk about is my father.He is a barber but sadly,he never cuts my hair.He is very busy,he works from 8 a.m. to 10p.m. every day.His hobby in freetime is collect things like radio,antique,can,etc.He love his collections very much and he will angry if someone touches them.The next member is my mother.She works as a saleswoman.She is busy,too.In the morning,she goes to work with my father(their workplace are close together).She is a caring woman.She always cook breakfasts for us and her dishes are delicious all the time.Although my mother is the woman but she doesn't take time to make up,dress up.She spends as much as possible to work and take care of her family.She is a strange woman.However,I love her the way she is.Finally,I will introduce about myself.My name is Vy.I am the only child in the family so I want to have a sister to play with sometimes.Now I'm in a final year at the high school.I'm trying my best to win a place at university.I think I'm still not good at English,math so I must learn harder to improve my skills.All the members of my family is all busy but we usually look after one another.On weekends we spend time together such as watching television,eating,...I'm happy because I am a member of my lovely family.

huyscr123 đã viết:Topic: Your family
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I come from a family of three people:my father,my mother and I.The first one I want to talk about is my father.He is a barber but sadly,he never cuts my hair.He is very busy,he works from 8 a.m. to 10p.m. every day.His hobby in freetime is collect things like radio,antique,can,etc.He love his collections very much and he will angry if someone touches them.The next member is my mother.She works as a saleswoman.She is busy,too.In the morning,she goes to work with my father(their workplace are close together).She is a caring woman.She always cook breakfasts for us and her dishes are delicious all the time.Although my mother is the woman but she doesn't take time to make up,dress up.She spends as much as possible to work and take care of her family.She is a strange woman.However,I love her the way she is.Finally,I will introduce about myself.My name is Vy.I am the only child in the family so I want to have a sister to play with sometimes.Now I'm in a final year at the high school.I'm trying my best to win a place at university.I think I'm still not good at English,math so I must learn harder to improve my skills.All the members of my family is all busy but we usually look after one another.On weekends we spend time together such as watching television,eating,...I'm happy because I am a member of my lovely family.

bblien đã viết:Topic : Benefits of learning English

Learning English brings to us numerous benefits, especially in modern life. Firstly, it gives us a chance to get a much better job after graduating from universities. Nowadays, more and more companies require their employees to use English fluently. And with being master of English, we would be promoted to a higher position in our field. Secondly, learning English helps us to break language barrier. Thanks to that, we can communicate with foreign people, live in other countries and make more friends all over the world. Therefore, our life will certainly be interesting and colorful. Last but not least, improving our English means improving our language skill, namely writing, reading, speaking and listening. It is one of the most important skills that â global citizen needs for. In conclusion, learning English is extremely important to everyone.

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vuthanhphuong29 đã viết:Topic: Your pet
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My pet is a dog. Her name is LuLu. I and her have lived together for 6 years. It's a long time with many nice memories. I have fed her when she was a small dog until now. My father bught her. Then, he gave her to me as a gift. I was very happy at that time. She is really a lovely dog. I love her so much. We often play together in mother's garden, I and her dig a hole then plant trees in it. We also chase each other a long the farm. She is bath twice a week. There for, I used to allow her to sleep in my bedroom when she was a small dog. Now she is a matured dog and is the mother of ten lovely pupies. She is one of my best friends whenever I'm sad, I just sit and talk with hẻ, then I feel really relax eventhough she doesn't say anything. I want to say to her that:'' I love you so much. I hope you will stay together with me forever.''

bblien1 đã viết:A wide range of plant and animal species have been driven to the verge of extinction for several causes. The first thing is habitat destruction. The drainage of wetlands, cutting forests, urbanization and road and dam construction have destroyed or seriously damaged natural habitats. Hence, the creatures have to move to other areas. They may be killed on the way or die of not adapting themselves to new condition. Secondly, the number of rare species has been considerably reduced as a result of worldwide commercial exploitation for food and other products. Rhino horn, for instance, is one of the most common products from endangered animals, whose the two largest markets are China and Vietnam. The last but not least cause is environmental pollution such as toxic chemicals in the air and land, contaminated water and increased water temperatures. Not only do those lead a community to decline they also harm its next generations' quantity and quality as well, which leaves permanent results for global biodiversity. In short, for above facts, the loss of wildlife has become so serious that people must act to prevent it.

vuthanhphuong29 đã viết:Topic: Write about a person you love or admire
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   In my family, my father is a person I admire most. His name is Van. He is 40 years old. Now, he is owner of a big farm in Binh Thanh. My father is wonderful daddy. Despite working hard but he always spends a lot of time to the upbringing and take care of my elder brother and I. Moreover, he is a good role model for me to follow. My father always generous with people who live next door and help everbody when they are in difficulties, he also have sense of hurmour; so most of them respect and love him. I admire and look up to my dad because he not only bring me up well but also stand by me give some precious advices. For example, when I am defeated in live, encounter some difficulties, he will gives some useful help to solve those problems. I love my father so much. I wish I would become like him in the future.

bblien1 đã viết:Topic: Write about a person you love or admire

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I see a number of people as my examples, the best of whom is my eldest aunt. She, in my opinion, is an extremely strong and capable woman. Brought up in a poor family, she used to experience a much harder childhood than her other friends. Since the days of a little girl, she had to help my grandparents do not only farming but also housework including taking care of three mischievous brothers. Excellent as her high school graduation result, she could not afford to enter even a small university because of poverty. However, with intelligence and strong will, as earning for living she tried to self-studied and continued finding a chance for training. After all of difficulties, now she got a high position in the State Bank, therefore, became my big family's pride. She is also my idol for laborious and courage. I hope I could become a successful one like her.

vuthanhphuong29 đã viết:Topic: Your job in the future
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 Marketing seem to be the kind of career I would like to choose in the future. I like this work because of several reasons. Firstly, marketing location is well-paid job. If you help your company sell more products, you will be paid the higher salary.  Of course, you need to have effective generalship to attract customers such as: research and development, promotion, marketing research, product-variety marketing , push Strategy, dynamism and so on. Secondly, working as a marketer gives me many opportunities of improving my persuading skill and ability to converting idea into works. Work of a marketer exact different skills, but if you mêt these requirements , you will be more and more professional. In short, It is simply my hobby and I love it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

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Excellent as her high school graduation result : động từ đâu @@

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bblien1 đã viết:Topic : Tell about your best friend.

During my youth, I have a best friend who I see as a treasure. Her name is Thu but always called Verb. She is the cutest girl I have seen with white skin, slim body and a lovable face. Especially, her hand is an admirable one whose fingers are so long and slender that they look really artistic. Despite of occasional angry, she is a gentle person by nature |she has a a gentle nature|. She is good at English, and not good at Math. She is a hard-working student. Her talent is drawing. She often draws cartoon characters in Ghibli's films. It's she that gives me a reason to dream of entering one of the most notable university  |university  => universities. (one of the most + Ns) |in our country, Foreign Trade University. As the word "A seven-year friendship is a permanent one" says, I hope we could be together to overcome difficulties.

"She is good at English, and not good at Math. She is a hard-working student. Her talent is drawing. She often draws cartoon characters in Ghibli's films." -> mấy câu này em không biết nên nối thế nào cho hợp lí, ad giúp em với ạ.